tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post1368495206746317127..comments2024-02-29T17:01:17.028+00:00Comments on LUPUS IN FLIGHT: RED KOI, BLACK SKIRTShaistahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00259344471712162333noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-80725349280935284712019-01-24T02:08:59.481+00:002019-01-24T02:08:59.481+00:00i see you beautiful red koi, swimming against the ...i see you beautiful red koi, swimming against the darkness of the disease. willing you to wiggle your way to where the bright water plays with the sunms_lilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03999098267891256848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-35826196129698135542019-01-24T02:01:49.969+00:002019-01-24T02:01:49.969+00:00Marvelous imagery! Antibiotics for the germy thing...Marvelous imagery! Antibiotics for the germy things and great writing for the soul :)Jillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14971432705586726610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-151003089176709082019-01-23T21:53:46.164+00:002019-01-23T21:53:46.164+00:00A tough journey of one shedding at a time... I lik...A tough journey of one shedding at a time... I like what you wrote!Dwight L. Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07992133580674047782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-38082920180439447072019-01-23T21:29:09.630+00:002019-01-23T21:29:09.630+00:00Nice lines: "and blue Monday arrives, I arise...Nice lines: "and blue Monday arrives, I arise<br />and begin to shed the creature that holds sway;"Frank Hubenyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058591172624203875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-3158949987462616572019-01-23T20:29:40.903+00:002019-01-23T20:29:40.903+00:00The layers of the koi shirt against the back drop ...The layers of the koi shirt against the back drop of being only almost shed of the disease... may the healing come, and I wish you would have a koi shirt too.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-40121690245184022892019-01-23T20:08:40.998+00:002019-01-23T20:08:40.998+00:00Wow Shaista, brave you are as you take on lupus. I...Wow Shaista, brave you are as you take on lupus. I loved the descriptions of the radiologist in the koi skirt. Continue to be strong!robtkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08727919675363545240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-62667402280621854382019-01-23T16:49:55.583+00:002019-01-23T16:49:55.583+00:00The beautiful title.......the absolutely beautiful...The beautiful title.......the absolutely beautiful first stanza. This is a poem from the heart. Your descriptive imagery is stunning. And the blood moon....a hopeful watershed. Only to read in your comments after the post that you are still being treated. So most importantly to say -- beyond the poem - your body is working to heal, in tandem with medicine and angels. Keep writing....keep patient....keep believing. Sending you hope and prayers (I do believe in angels along the way) and positive thoughts for your recovery. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12664830773553716989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-44833868431056115462019-01-23T14:16:46.887+00:002019-01-23T14:16:46.887+00:00I do hope they flush out the microbes. Water is fr...I do hope they flush out the microbes. Water is friendly, think of it full of koi, getting rid of unwanted guests. Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-40923449134795276162019-01-18T01:54:58.647+00:002019-01-18T01:54:58.647+00:00Oh, my friend, you had just escaped! I am sorry th...Oh, my friend, you had just escaped! I am sorry this is happening and hope being sequestered and medicated drums those dratted germs out of your body. I wish you a koi skirt, if not, then a Japanese koi garden, full of peace and beauty, upon recovery. I am keeping my wild beaches ready for your arrival.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com