tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post594966676673995266..comments2024-02-29T17:01:17.028+00:00Comments on LUPUS IN FLIGHT: WINDFALLSShaistahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00259344471712162333noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-49000797216432248672016-10-08T01:35:31.939+01:002016-10-08T01:35:31.939+01:00Thank you Sherry - it was my walking poem, gatheri...Thank you Sherry - it was my walking poem, gathering autumn as I headed towards the twins xxShaistahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00259344471712162333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-64998194430468201672016-10-08T01:34:25.974+01:002016-10-08T01:34:25.974+01:00Thank you so much - that's wonderful to hear.Thank you so much - that's wonderful to hear.Shaistahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00259344471712162333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-87625432613063712292016-10-08T01:33:49.676+01:002016-10-08T01:33:49.676+01:00Thank you so much xThank you so much xShaistahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00259344471712162333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-87982071097077187452015-11-09T17:49:22.428+00:002015-11-09T17:49:22.428+00:00no words, thank you...no words, thank you...Nadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18083880488413948611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-54903764037797730152015-11-02T08:31:30.538+00:002015-11-02T08:31:30.538+00:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12883922182271142891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-64073597229575182842015-11-01T23:45:23.431+00:002015-11-01T23:45:23.431+00:00Picking up hearts and setting them free. That is w...Picking up hearts and setting them free. That is what I like to think. I was missing you so I came to visit here and I am happy I did. Kisses sweet one. Kenza. <br />https://caramelcaramelo.wordpress.comKenzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03735498316576611409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-21923174141272478402015-10-30T02:29:48.556+00:002015-10-30T02:29:48.556+00:00New shoots are always waiting. Lovely!New shoots are always waiting. Lovely!The Blog of Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00650938872732748697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-28504968379739250582015-10-29T13:48:30.262+00:002015-10-29T13:48:30.262+00:00I ADORE this poem! My new favourite of yours. I es...I ADORE this poem! My new favourite of yours. I especially love "everything is not dead when it falls". And "I am gorging on the wind that feeds me hope." So beautiful, Shaista. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-17407041968589390362015-10-29T00:00:07.438+00:002015-10-29T00:00:07.438+00:00StunningStunningPleasant Streethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00060701245925637719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-64982655469418135752015-10-28T22:12:19.821+00:002015-10-28T22:12:19.821+00:00The tension in this is awesome!The tension in this is awesome!Carol Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09366366047409134966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-87788185789009386992015-10-28T18:14:50.206+00:002015-10-28T18:14:50.206+00:00So many beautifully effective lines in this. I li...So many beautifully effective lines in this. I like especially, "Everything is not dead when it falls."Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-92198717458624296932015-10-28T17:59:24.791+00:002015-10-28T17:59:24.791+00:00Beautiful imagery in this and I think your use of ...Beautiful imagery in this and I think your use of the second person was quite effective.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-68759344865289631492015-10-28T15:45:57.412+00:002015-10-28T15:45:57.412+00:00I like the line that says "Everything is not ...I like the line that says "Everything is not dead when it falls." And, "I'm gorging on the wind that feeds me hope"...such a powerful image that evokes. Beautiful expression of fall, love and hope. Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-71383087174083099902015-10-28T14:51:35.580+00:002015-10-28T14:51:35.580+00:00This is very strong poetry; I loved every word.This is very strong poetry; I loved every word.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-1738356171579630252015-10-28T14:48:10.149+00:002015-10-28T14:48:10.149+00:00Lovely...autumn is my personal spring...Lovely...autumn is my personal spring...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-85793536458070230432015-10-28T12:00:47.298+00:002015-10-28T12:00:47.298+00:00Beautiful... I love the interplay of fall and love...Beautiful... I love the interplay of fall and love and death and life.<br /><br />I especially loved these lines:<br />"I pick up the living,<br />shaped like hearts,<br />the plump, yellow, still beating."mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-29325909004069724082015-10-28T11:25:17.416+00:002015-10-28T11:25:17.416+00:00This is absolutely fantastic :D :DThis is absolutely fantastic :D :DSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-90090212972145245282015-10-28T05:59:05.281+00:002015-10-28T05:59:05.281+00:00The first stanza particularly impressed me,
Espec...The first stanza particularly impressed me, <br />Especially in autumn <br />When you become part of the fall.<br /><br />A lovely poem of love.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7577160948898919178.post-17663528782080254262015-10-28T04:35:37.590+00:002015-10-28T04:35:37.590+00:00Brownest of leaves..
become black
and
life
again...Brownest of leaves..<br />become black<br />and <br />life <br />again<br />for<br />garden<br />green..<br />and with<br />Love as<br />black<br />leaves<br />light<br />comes<br />bright<br />back<br />fresh and crisp<br />now fall wind..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.com