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Tuesday 31 January 2012

CONFIDENCE (An Abstract Theory)

I Write My Face
Upon My Age
In Lines
Of Poetry -

I Right My Wrongs
Up On The Stage
For All The World
To See.

© Shaista Tayabali, 2012
image prompt: red spot II, wassily kandinsky, 1921, magpie tales
poetry prompt: dverse
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19 comments:

  1. Buddah Moskowitz31 January 2012 at 23:18

    I like this.

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  2. booguloo31 January 2012 at 23:46

    Two stanzas that could stand on there own. Nice write.

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  3. Brian Miller1 February 2012 at 00:34

    nice...than perform it loud for all to hear...because it is very well done...smiles.

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  4. Mary Helen-Art Saves Lives1 February 2012 at 02:36

    What beautiful poem...so elegantly expressed and the painting reminds me of Kandinsky. Living with Lupus is a constant balancing act that is often recorded on our faces and in our eyes. Peace be with you, Mary Helen Fernandez Stewart

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  5. Helen1 February 2012 at 02:40

    This is lovely ... beautifully composed.

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  6. Doctor FTSE1 February 2012 at 09:12

    Fine verses. Live with courage.

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  7. Dave King1 February 2012 at 09:34

    This is just SO good!

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  8. steven1 February 2012 at 12:32

    living out loud . . . . steven

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  9. Usama Rehman1 February 2012 at 14:00

    Nice and beautiful ))

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  10. A1 February 2012 at 18:06

    I love it, in fact I think this one is my favorite poem of yours :-)

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  11. Carrie Van Horn1 February 2012 at 20:19

    A stunning write Shaista! That first line is amazing!!

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  12. Robert Gibson: PWES Editor1 February 2012 at 20:30

    This poem is stunning ... I'm still processing it!

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  13. Tess Kincaid2 February 2012 at 00:22

    Very nice...

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  14. Jeanne-ming Brantingham2 February 2012 at 00:27

    I love this poem. So zen.

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  15. Bianca2 February 2012 at 11:08

    I really enjoyed the second stanza

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  16. Trellissimo2 February 2012 at 19:25

    An excellent interpretation for this Mag, thank you.

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  17. miss pie2 February 2012 at 20:02

    confidence is a beautiful coat to wear with the finest...

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  18. Isabel Doyle4 February 2012 at 09:38

    Lovely lines - hope you are keeping well
    Isabel x

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  19. ds4 February 2012 at 20:41

    Lovely. We should all have such courage. Thank you.

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